I really like your map. Not only did you include information on plant and retail stores, you also presented areas where Coca-cola had violated certain human rights laws. Having edited your paper I think this map should do very well in supporting your paper. One thing you may want to fix is some of your place marks are not labeled, especially some of the yellow ones.
Wow, what a map. You're got my vote :) More specifically, I like how you focused on alerting readers about the negative activities of Coca-Cola. I thought that was very informative, and I liked your use of a variety of icons, especially the red warning icon for areas where you have discovered bad business and environmental practices. Good work!
Michelle,
ReplyDeleteI really like your map. Not only did you include information on plant and retail stores, you also presented areas where Coca-cola had violated certain human rights laws. Having edited your paper I think this map should do very well in supporting your paper. One thing you may want to fix is some of your place marks are not labeled, especially some of the yellow ones.
--Logan Hanson
I really like this map also! It might be useful to add descriptions to the lines to explain how the commodity chains work in the text near the map.
ReplyDelete-Priya
Wow, what a map. You're got my vote :)
ReplyDeleteMore specifically, I like how you focused on alerting readers about the negative activities of Coca-Cola. I thought that was very informative, and I liked your use of a variety of icons, especially the red warning icon for areas where you have discovered bad business and environmental practices. Good work!
Ashley Davidson